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Reviewer: May (Signed)
January 21, 2008 3:28 am
I really loved this fic. Your writing is very beautiful and descriptive, and even though there wasn't a lot of dialog, it was somehow more than enough to carry the story with the added thoughts and reflections. From the first chapter you've captured my mind and my senses, you've immersed me in a rich world that had me an emotional wreck. Erestor was beautifully captured, and even in his bondage he shone with such life and clarity. From his awkward submission, to the realization of what happened to him, you wove him into such a ansty fiece and dark beutifully sexsual sensual being, that I am awestruck. Glorfindel too, he's so alive with his sunshine smile and easy temperment - until he becomes the defender of the weak - then watch out! He's perfect in all his roles, yet fallable in his doubts - especially as a would be lover. The supporting roles also had their weaknesses exposed, and I liked that very much. I scoured the net for the next story in the series, and I could not find anything. I noticed that you have these dates down: Updated: January 13, 2008; Published: January 11, 2008 So I'm hoping so very much that it won't be long for the next story to be published. Thank you so much, I will always be looking for your beautiful stories, May.

May, Your review was a wonderful surprise to find here. It means a lot to me that you liked the story. I appreciate the details you have gone into. The 'not a lot of dialogue' comment is interesting. I was just thinking about that now as I write a chapter of the sequel. Also, you make me feel I did perhaps manage to tell some of the story as I was trying to, which is great to know. Your comments about Erestor and Glorfindel gave me an idea of how they seem to other people, made me think, and also made me feel happy you enjoyed them. I love that the story captured your imagination. Your review has made me smile. Thank you very much for reading and for taking the trouble to write! Erfan [original reply 080502 edited 081022]
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